验收情景作文.pptVIP

情景作文 写作 评分细则 内容全面，七个数据都有正确表述，并且有必要的过渡语言和适当的细节支撑，写出了自己的看法，语言流畅，定为第二档（15-17分）。根据语言质量决定是否升档或降档； 漏写一个数据，一般应定为第三档（12-14分），根据语言质量决定是否升一档或降档，但若漏写饼状图关键数据“不信任40.34%”则定为四档； 漏写两个数据，一般应定为第四档（6-11分），根据语言质量决定是否升一档或降档； 漏写三个数据，定为第四档中、低分段。根据语言质量决定档内中、低分或是否降档； 漏写四或五个数据，定为第五档（1-5 分）。视语言质量，决定档内高、中、低分段； 只写出两个数据，给2分；只写出一个数据，给1分； 一.审题： 假设你是红星中学高中学生李华，最近，你校学生会对影响学生课外阅读的因素进行了调查，结果见下图。请根据图示提供的信息给某英文报纸写信，反映调查的实际情况，并寻求建议。 二.情景作文题目要求分析 介绍调查结果——全面描述四个数据(要点1-4）； 注意陈述的逻辑性，避免语言重复。 关键词语——认为…… Believe , think, hold the opinion/view that… is the main cause, 此文内容为反映问题，所以上述词可以引申为: Complain about, blame…for this, consider … as another factor, 其它词汇的处理 本文共有四个数据需要处理 72%： burden, heavy, stressful 16%: support, in favor of 8%: opening-time/ hours, short, not enough 4%: high price/ cost of , can’t afford, stop 改错 There has a lot of students , about 72% Only have 4% of the students think… 16% students The library only have less books There are some people think the library not often to be open The library books in school isn’t too much. 好句 The books is not enough for every-aged students.(许） 8% of them agree that the school library offer us books( 京） While there are 4% refusing to read complaining about the short opening time of libraries.( 慧） First，most of the students blame the heavy homework burden for the main cause.(宇） 情景作文题目要求分析 2、寻求建议： 适当过渡，礼貌寻求建议（要点5） Different people hold different opinions on this issue, but how can we deal with the above problems? You are so kind if you could offer us some advice, look forward to your reply. 3、文章时态——根据所给首句判断，全文应为现在时态； 1.谓 语 动词（基础） 2.从 句 3.非谓语动词 1.谓语动词改错 1.72% student has not time to reading . 2. 4% people believed many book is expensive. 3. The most important is hardly study. 4. 8%of the reason is depend on the libraries. 5. About 16% of the students parents are not allowed their children read the outside-class book. 2.从句改错 1.It is to said that many libraries opening time is too short that students