作文中常用的过渡句.doc

作文中常用的过渡句 作文中常用句型和过渡词 句子及段落的连贯性要求恰当地使用关联词，也叫过渡词。段落是否连贯主要取决于文章内容是否符合逻辑，但是段落缺乏连贯性并不仅仅是逻辑顺序问题，过度词语也起着十分重要的作用。试比较： (1)Nowadays there is a lack of understanding between parent and child. (2)Parents complain that their children’s behavior is often unreasonable. (3)Children complain that their parents are too old-fashioned. (4)When a child has a problem, he will not tell his parents. (5)He will go to his friends instead. (1)Nowadays there is a lack of understanding between parent and child. (2)Parents often complain about their children’s “unreasonable” behavior, while children usually think their parents are too “old-fashioned”. (3)Then when a child has a problem, he usually goes to his intimate friends for sympathy and advice, leaving his parents totally in the dark. 比较： 1. 增加过渡词While，一方面强化了两代人之间互不理解的对立关系，另有一方面将（2）句和（3）句浓缩成一个句子，避免了雷同句式罗列造成的平庸感。由 Then引出结尾句，增强连贯性。 2. 句（3）分词短语leaving…充当表示结果的状语，将初稿中的句（4）和（5）合并为一个句子，增加了句式变化。To leave…in the dark意思是“使…蒙在鼓里”是一个习语。作文中如能出现一两个习语，不仅能使文章有闪光的语言点，而且显得文章地道。 3. 初稿中complain 后的that从句改成complain about，使得语言更简练。 熟练掌握一些过渡词： 1. 表示叙述顺序：first,…second,…,/ firstly,…secondly,…lastly,…/ to begin with,…, next…,finally…/ 2. 补充，递进：besides,/ moreover/ furthermore/in addition/ what is more/most important of all/last but not least/worse still/to make matter worse 例：The house is too small for a family of four, and furthermore/besides/what’s more/moreover /in addition/worse still , it is in a bad location. 3. 结果，原因： since / because /for /due to/ owing to/ so/ therefore/ consequently/ thus/ as a result/ as a consequence/ for this reason/ thanks to/ with the help of 4. 对照，对比，转折，让步：even though/ in spite of that/ however/ but/ regardless of …/ as opposed to this…/ nevertheless/ while/ on the contrary/ on the one hand…on the other hand It is hard work; I enjoy it though. Contrary to what I had originally thought, the trip turned out to be fun. 5. 举例：for instance/ for example/ take…for example/ such as/ like/ namely/ that is to say 6. 总结：in a wo