2013春北京会考作文讲评.pptVIP

2013春季会考作文问题剖析 2013、12、25 写得好的同学 问题2：没有文体意识 问题3：时态语言错误太多 We helped the poor students which in the mountain. 问题3：时态语言错误太多 We organized a School Book Fair that we can sell our extra book. 问题3：时态语言错误太多 It held on the playground. 问题4：常用表达法错误 1、not only...but also 问题4：常用表达法错误 1、not only...but also 问题4：常用表达法错误 1、not only...but also 问题4：常用表达法错误 2、exchange 问题4：常用表达法错误 2、exchange 小结 1、仔细审题 * 2013春季会考作文问题剖析 问题1：审题失误 介绍活动情况 We bought second-hand books at the Book Fair You can buy books. 给笔友写e-mail 交流 Hows everything going? Id like to tell you something interesting in our school. Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thats all about our Book Fair. Do you have the similar activity? We helped the poor students in the mountain area. We organized a School Book Fair at which we could sell our extra books. All of us took part in the activity that donated our books. All of us took part in the activity in which we donated our books. It was held on the playground. not only … but also 应连接两个相对称的并列成分。 Not only Mr Lin but also his son joined the Party two years ago. （连接两个主语） I not only play tennis but also practise shooting. （连接两个谓语动词） He plays not only the piano but also the violin. （连接两个宾语） They speak English not only in class but also in the dormitory. （连接两个地点状语） not only … but also 连接两个分句，并且 not only 位于句首时，第一个分句要部分倒装。例如： Not only does the sun give us light but also it gives us heat. Not only did he speak English correctly， but also he spoke it fluently. Not only is this young man clever but also he is hardworking. not only … but also 不能用于否定句 此句型也可写成not only...but... exchange + n. +with sb. (接可数名词时均用复数形式） I often exchange information with him. We exchanged books with each other. exchange + n. +for 名：以...交换... I exchanged my book for a ring. 2、关注文体 3、正确表达 4、注重积累 *