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智课网TOEFL备考资料新托福考试写作剖析【附优秀范文】 摘要： 有关托福写作的优秀文章我们在之前的文章中已经介绍了不少。本文继续为大家介绍一些在新托福考试写作中我们遇到的一些精华内容，相信对大家的托福写作考试会有一定的帮助，最后祝愿大家在即将到到来的托福考试中能够取得优异的成绩。 第一部分重点对这两项写作任务的备考进行讲解，使考生掌握切实有用的写作技巧。第二部分为学生习作修改及语言剖析。建议考生对这185篇范文进行学习、模仿，尤其对每篇文章的举例进行模仿练习，这对考取高分有很大帮助。另外，这185篇范文不仅可用于备考独立写作部分，对新 托福 口语测试部分前两道题的备考也有很好的借鉴意义。 新 托福考试 写作剖析： The lecturer contends that prescribed burns prevent larger forest fires. This directly contradicts the reading passage’s claim that there are more disadvantages than advantages. First, in spite of the concerns some people have, only a few animals die from the burns; there is enough time for animals to escape. Moreover, the professor cites the example of Yellowstone National Park, where animals have no difficulties finding new habitats because of the parks huge size. This refutes the reading passage’s claim that forest animals die from prescribed burns and that even if they manage to survive, they have a hard time because of the competition for food in their new territory. On top of that, the lecturer says there has been a misunderstanding about the environmental damage of prescribed burns. It is true that prescribed burns produce smoke; however, the amount of smoke is much less than the amount of smoke generated during major forest fires. This rebuts the reading passage’s claim that since many prescribed burns take several days, smoke coming from the burning causes air pollution. Finally, prescribed burns are deliberately carried out. The forest officials put a lot of thought and efforts into the burns before they intentionally set a forest on fire; accordingly, it is less feasible that the forest officials would conduct the burns if conditions are not suitable. This contradicts the idea mentioned in the reading passage that prescribed burns can change into major forest fires by spreading unexpectedly. 例二： Do you agree or disagree: the most effective way for governments to encourage energy conservation is to increase the price of gasoline and electricit