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专业八级写作 Angela Lesson Six Part One 作文点评，范文赏析，写作技巧 Part Two 写作练习 写作技巧 文章主体段落三大原则 一、举实例 思维短路， 举实例！ 提出一个观点，举实例！ 提出一个方案，举实例！ 任何情况下，只要无法继续文章，尽管举例子！ In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colors, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they film him or her. 二、做比较 方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的； 只有通过比较，才能发现二者的相同点（through comparison）和不同点（through contrast）。 相似的比较： in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较： on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, … 三、换言之 没话说了，可以换一句话再说，也就是要写够字数，或者说，更充分地阐述你的观点。 实际就是重复重复再重复！ 比如： 你想表达 I love you! I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you. I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you. 再如：要表达I cannot bear it. 可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it. 因此可以这样说：I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it. 更多短语： in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simple 写作真题 2006 Joseph Epstein, a famous American writer, once said, We decide what is important and what is trivial in life. We decide so that what makes us significant is either what we do or what we refuse to do. But no matter how different the universe may be to our choices and decisions, these choices and decisions are ours to make. We decide. We choose. And as we decide and choose, so are our lives formed. In the end, forming our own destiny is what ambition is about. Do you agree or disagree with him? Write an essay of about 400 words entitled: Ambition 范文赏析 写作练习 Writing VI Instruction: Before coming to college，students often have a hard time deciding on their majors．Some people suggest that they shoul