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初中学生写作常见弊病列举及分析 *这一节课谈写作常见的弊病和对策,使我们的作文拿到较高的分。 一、标点符号 目前中学生英文写作中标点符号误用的现象相当普遍，这也多少给作品的整体美感带来了些负面影响。 错误一：I like apples、bananas、pears、 oranges and so on. 评析：英语中无“顿号”，句中的“顿号”应当改为“逗号”。 I like apples,bananas,pears,oranges and so on. 错误二：Im a middle school student。 评析：英语中的“句号”为实心小圆点，句中的“。”应改为“·”。I’m a middle school student. 错误三：There were many kinds of animals on the farm,cows,dogs,chickens,pigs……评析：英语中的“省略号”为三点，中文中的“省略号”才是六点。 There were many kinds of animals on the farm, cows, dogs, chickens, pigs… 错误四：The name of the library book was 《Red Star Over China》 评析：英语中的书名号以“双引号”表示，所以应改为“Red Star over China”。 错误五：We have a new classmate this term ,his name is Jack, he comes from America. 评析：这是受中文影响在学生标点使用中存在最广泛的“逗号错误”。英语中如果两个陈述句结构、意思完整则通常以“句号”结尾，这一点与中文中可以连续在几个完整的句子后加“逗号”截然不同。所以，例句中应该把两个“逗号”都改为“句号”。 We have a new classmate this term. His name is Jack. He comes from America. 错误六：He said I will go with Mike. 评析：这句直接引语错在标点漏用，并引起了歧义。正确的写法应当是 He said :“I will go with Mike.” 错误七： My name is Mǎ Xiǎo Míng . His name is Wáng Gǎng. 英语中没有汉语的声调符号，名字的拼写有固定的要求，所以上句中名字的正确写法应当是：Ma Xiaoming, Wang Gang。 错误八：1.Tom very likes China. 2.In the shop the people are very friendly. 这类错误以其明显的汉语化特点使英语表达变得不合乎习惯，应为： Tom likes China very much. The people in the shop are very friendly. 这是某市中考英文写作的一篇考生作文，该作文里面的语言错误或弊病带有很大的代表性，现抄录、评述如下。 1. Today was Friday. 2. Jim went home by bus after school was over. 3.There was many peoples on the bus. 4.But luckly he found an empty seat. 5.The bus stoped at a stop. 6.An old woman was getting on the bus. 7.She was very old. 8.She couldn’t stand on the bus easy . 9.But there was no empty seat. 10.At that time Jim was stood up . 11.Jim asked the old woman sit his seat 12.The old woman thanked to Jim is were people luckily stopped got easily to take/have She was so old that she couldn’t stand and very much. 13.All on the bus people said Jim is a a good boy. 14.I think we must learn to Jim.