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二．漫画类 先描述图画 再发表自己看法 范文：简要描述图片，并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。 内容要点： 描述文字说明： 学生被迫上很多补习班 无兴趣可言 议论文字说明： 太多的补习班是浪费时间 学习要有兴趣 家长不要强迫孩子参加补习 表达希望 （二）One possible version: Look at this picture. You will understand better “Too much work makes Jack a dull boy”. He has to go to so many training classes besides his school classes. Life is no fun at all for him. Holidays and weekends have become dull work-days. He is too tired to learn these lessons well with no interest. In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students. They might do better when they show interest in what they are learning. Please don’t force these students to do what they are not willing to, and when learning is fun, surely they will do better than we expect! （三）文章结构和套语： Look at this picture. You will understand better “Too much work makes Jack a dull boy”. He has to … besides his school classes. Life is …. … have become …. He is … In my opinion, … for many students. They might …when they … what they are learning. Please don’t …what they…, and when learning is fun, surely … 1）. 开头： Look at this picture. The picture shows that… From this picture, we can see… 2）．衔接句： 1. As we all know, … 2. As is well-known, … 3. It is well known that… 4. In my opinion, … 5. As far as I am concerned, … 6. This sight reminds me of something in my daily life. 3）．衔接词 1．表示时间顺序：first/ firstly, then, next, after, after that, during, throughout, before, later, while, meanwhile, at present, by now, finally, in the end, at last, at that time, in the past, immediately等。 2．表示递进关系：and, also, furthermore, moreover, besides, in addition, above all, what’s more, what’s better, in the same way等。 表示方位：near (to), far (from), in (the) front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside等。 表示因果关系：as, since, for, so, because, thus, accordingly, consequently, as a result, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to, therefore等