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河南省郑州市新世纪学校2012届高三英语专题总复习精选强化练习题（二百一十九） 林宏的笔友莉莉今年夏天将来沪旅游。林宏去信表示欢迎，并准备去机场迎接。还告诉她上海有不少值得游玩的地方，他将陪同参观旅游。(用书信体写) 学生习作·外教批改 Dear lily：1Lily,2 I’m very glad that you’ll_have_a_trip you are coming3 to Shanghai this summer.I can’t wait to see meet4 you at the airport and show you around Shanghai. As we all know，Shanghai is the biggest city in China.Especially In these recent years， 5 many great changes have taken place in Shanghai.She is a sea of which absorbs6 different cultures and customs and develops her own spirits，yet has developed her own very unique identity. Jinmao Tower is one of Shanghai’s most well-known symbols.You can’t7 really shouldn’t miss a chance to visit it.We can have8 There is a good view of Shanghai from the 88th floor in_the Tower9.On January 1st，the Shanghai’s New Year concert by_which_Shanghai welcomes the new year10 was held in a new11 great new structure，the Shanghai Arts Center.12 It’s located in Pudong and looks13 just like a beautiful butterfly.In the evening，the colourful lights on its roof will shine14 with the music playing15 as the music plays.I think you’ll like it.And in16 during your 7 day seven-day17 journey visit，I hope you’ll have a special day at last We’ll when we visit the Yu Garden，where the Shanghai’s traditional customs and culture can be seen.The food there is very really18 dilicoius delicious. Hope you’ll come soon.19 I can’t wait to take you around and have a good time in Shanghai. Yours sinecerly20sincerely Lin Hong ,旁　批 1．标点符号使用不当。应该用逗号。现在，一般商业信件中，除了信的主体之外都省去标 点。 2．人名的首字母一定要大写。 3．谈论将来的安排时应该用现在进行时态，不要用will。 4．用这个词更准确。 5．你在谈论最近几年发生的变化，所以应该用in recent years。原句Especially in these years 表达很别扭。 6．absorb是个很好的词。遗憾的是，它用在这句话里不合适。absorb的意思是“吸收(液体、 气体等)”，而海洋(the sea)不会吸收任何东西，它是液体，液体是被别的东西所吸收的， 如：The sponge cloth quickly absorbed the spilled juice.(海绵布很快就将溢出的果汁吸干 了。) 7．给出建议时用can’t不合适，应该用shouldn’t。 8．这个表达很别扭。参见改写后的句子。 9．不用再提读者已经明白的事。 10．原句太累赘。参见改写后的句子。 11．几个