书面表达短文写作技巧文(教师版).docVIP

书面表达短文写作技巧 中考书面表达主要类型 一 记叙文(Narration): 1.写人 2. 叙事 3.写景 4.状物 二 议论文(Argumentation) 1.学习 2. 社会 3. 音乐 4.体育 5.环保 6.时事 书面表达考查的要点 ①能否根据提示要求运用所学词组、句型写出易懂的短文。 ②短文结构是否有层次、有条理、能否清楚表达自己的意思。 ③是否能较为准确地运用语法、词汇, 拼写、标点基本正确。 影响作文分数的因素： 1 题目要求、内容要点； 2 句子准确、通顺； 3 层次结构清晰； 4 拼写、语法等错误； 5 卷面整洁度； 前车之鉴!!! 1.文不对题（文体格式不规范） 2.离题太远（抓不到要点，该说的不说，不该说的说的太多） 3.词不达意（有的甚至用汉语标注、留空或抄袭试卷上的材料） 4.病句太多（时态、语态、人称、数等语法错误） 5.卷面不工整（字迹潦草、乱涂改、添插箭头满篇飞，这是经电脑扫描后网上阅卷的大忌!） 6.句式单一,平铺直叙 7. 无过渡语 一. 基础写作基本要求 I. 基础写作考我们什么能力? A. 信息处理或整理的能力;[如:信息之间能否合并为逻辑关系或处理先后顺序等 1. 存在问题 (1) I am quite satisfied with(对…..满意) the travel agency(旅行社) and the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic（热情的） and considerate（周到的）to all tourists，especially to the older people…. 错误诊断：总体信息和细节信息不能合并 I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. First of all, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists，especially to the older people. （2）However, the food provided in the restaurant didn’t agree with many of us. Quite a few of us had to buy extra food. 错误诊断：因果关系的信息合并 However, the food provided in the restaurant didn’t agree with many of us and quite a few of us had to buy extra food. (He had a high fever and went to see the doctor.) 3) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic, he could concern old men in our group. 错误诊断： ‘‘一逗到底”的中式英语表达导致信息表达出现问题，不能用多个简单句表达多个不同类型的信息内容。 I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and he could concern old men in our group. II. 如何处理或整理信息? 一、一个完整的信息用一个句子来表达； 二、、信息之间如果存在逻辑关系就应该合并， 但如果它们之间没有逻辑关系就不能随便合并。 三总体信息和细节信息不能合并； 四、要正确使用标点符号避免影响信息的正确表达 B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确性和合适性] 1. 旅行社 travel agency 2. 食物不合味口 the food didn’t agree with us 3. 他讲解清晰,生动。 He explained everything about the places in a clear and lively way. His explanation about those places of interest was very clear and vivid. 4. 货真价实的购物场所 the shops where we could buy good bargains the shops where we could