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病句修改 1.不一致 2.修饰语错位 9.累赘 【例 13】People who are in London are working hard for the 2012 Olympics. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 所谓“不一致”不仅指主谓不一致，它还包括数的不一致、时态不一致以及代词不一致等。 【解析】 Mary是第三人称单数，因而本句的have应该为has；同理want应该为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。 【正确】Once Mary has money, she can do what she wants to do. 玛丽一旦有了钱，她就能想干什么就干什么了。 【例 1】Once Mary have money, she can do what she want to do. Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 【例 2】Water will boil at 100℃. 【解析】表示客观真理的句子，应用一般现在是。 【正确】 Water boils at 100℃. 水100℃在沸腾。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 【例 3】She can play basketball. She too can play football. 英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能发生变化。 【解析】 too 意为“也”时，一般位于句首。 【正确】 She can play basketball. She can play football，too. 她会打篮球，也会踢足球。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 3.句子不完整 【例 4】There are many ways to know the information. For example, by TV, newspaper, and so on. 在口语中，交际双方可借助手势、语气、上下文等理解不完整的句子。可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清。这种情况常常发生在主语写完以后，作者又想加些内容进行补充说明的时候。 【解析】本句后半部分For example, by TV, newspaper, and so on不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的短语，不能独立成句。 【正确】There are many ways to know the information，for example, by TV, newspaper, and so on. 了解信息有许多方法，例如，通过电视、广播、报纸等等。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 4.悬垂修饰语 【例 5】At the age of ten, his grandma died. 【解析】句中At the age of ten只指出10岁时祖母去世了，但没有说明是在“谁”10岁时祖母去世的。如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了。 【正确】When he was ten, his grandma died. 在他10岁时，他的祖母去世了。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 【例 6】To do well in school, good grades are essential. 【解析】句中不定式短语to do well in school