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学生作文中常见句型错误P48 ?1.? TV now plays and important role in our daily life, Because we think it extremely important.书写错误、逻辑谬误TV now plays an important role in our daily life, because it provides us with messages necessary to us.??2.? Although an opportunity is rare, but we must be ready to seize it.逻辑冗余、主干搭配不当Although opportunities are rare, we must be ready to seize them.Opportunities are rare, but we must be ready to seize them.??3.? With a rise in the number of cars and buses, traffic in Shanghai has become more and more crowded.主干搭配不当With a rise in the number of cars and buses, traffic in Shanghai has become heavier.With a rise in the number of cars and buses, Shanghai has become more and more crowded.??4.? Each of us may take a part-time job to help support ourselves, but if you spend too much time on it, your study will be affected.指代不一致Each of us may take a part-time job to help support himself, but if he spends too much time on it, his academic performance may be affected.?5.? There are many people complain the paper-making mill pollute our fresh water can by people use.成分冗余There are many people who complain the paper-making mill polluting our fresh water used by people.?6.? At the age of six, my father began to give me English lessons.逻辑主语前后不一致At the age of six, I was taught English by my father.?7.? Before submitting any written work, careful proofreading must be done.逻辑主语前后不一致Before submitting any written work, one must do careful proofreading.?8.? The computer like TV, it has both advantages and disadvantages.词性误用Like computer, TV has both advantages and disadvantages.?9.? We naturally assumed that they had arrived there. They left several hours ago.句间逻辑缺失We naturally assumed that they had arrived there, for they left several hours ago.?10.? When demand for goods was shrinking. Firms would close down or lay off workers.句间逻辑谬误Where demand for goods was shrinking, firms would close down or lay off workers.?11.? You have had the disease, you are immune to it for