书面表达专题8.pptVIP

书面表达专题(八) 学生习作点评 (一) 请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文。标题为：My Teacher Mr Moore。 Theres teacher Mr Moore. Who is lovely and thirty-four. Always encouraging us to try. He leads us to a world of“why”． We all admire him more and more. 注意：1.不得照抄短诗原文。 2．必须结合短诗的内容，发挥想象，适当展开。 3．必须突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语意连贯。 4．短文不能写成诗歌形式。 5．词数：120左右。 [学生习作] My Teacher Mr Moore Mr Moore，thirty-four aged①，is a lovely teacher.But at the first sight to him，Im filling②with unkindness to him due to his serious-looking face and severe words. With time goes③，all of us make friend with④him.So we always play basketball and share our interestin