2014-12-16下午4-6点_TEM4_写作讲座分析.ppt

TEM 4写作部分 2014-12-16 TEM4作文评分标准 一、思想与表达　（满分：7分） Ideas and Arguments 二、语言运用能力 （满分：6分） Language Use/Control 三、写作规范 (满分：2分) Mechanics/ Orthographic Conventions 一、思想与表达（满分：7分） 1.思想内容(Idea Content)：内容切题、内容充实、观点明确、论据支持论点、有独到见解 2.表达效果(Effectiveness)：表达清晰流畅、有说服力 3.篇章组织结构(Rhetorical Organization)：每段有主题句、句间衔接自然、段间过渡自然、第一部分明确提出观点、最后一部分自然得出结论、段落排列自然合理 二、语言运用能力（满分：6分） 1.准确性(Correctness)： 语法正确、 句子结构正确、 固定搭配正确、 习语正确、 用词正确 2.丰富性(Richness)：词汇丰富、语言地道 3.得体性(Appropriateness)：语气恰当，语言地道 4.流利度(Fluency)：完成规定字数（200字） 一般180-230字，不过2010年超字数没有扣分，字数不够扣分 三、写作规范(满分：2分) 1.单词拼写正确(Spelling: Correct) 2.标点符号正确(Punctuation: Standardized) 3.大小写正确(Captalization: Standardized) 4.书写美观(Handwriting: pleasant) 5.卷面整洁(Neat and Clean) 2010 TEM4 作文题目 Situation: It was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week. And each of them paid her 60 yuan a month. This has led a heated debate as to whether college students should hire cleaners. Should College Students Hire Cleaners? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state clearly what your view is. In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. 议论文: (三部分) （满分15分） 结构： 提出观点 用论据支持 总结观点 二、语言表达：chinglish 太多 1.Chairman Mao---chair Mao 2.Studying in university especially benefical for us to become more independence. 3.Supposing to hire a cleaner, it againests our original purpose of go to university. 4.We cost our parents’ money. 5.Firstly, for college students, they are adults, not children. Go to colleg means that they are independent form their parents gradually. 6.However,one hundred yuan may be a week cost of diet. 7.In a word, do the cleaning is a performance of independent. 8.不扫一屋，何以扫天下。一室不扫，何以扫天下。 If a man can’t clean a room, how can he clean the world? 阅卷过程中所发现问题 一、跑题： 1.把cleaner 当作machine来写 2.把cleaner 当作