2014《创新设计》高中英语 Unit 5 First aid Period 3 Grammar Writing 课件（人教版必修5，课标通用）.pptVIP

【写作分析】 第一步：认真审题 一审体裁：本次写作要求写一篇日记。属应用文写作范畴。英文日记和汉语日记一样，是用来记叙一天中所发生的有意义的事情或对将来的打算等。日记可分为记事、议论、描写及抒情等。记事型是用英语记述当天自己生活学习中发生的事情。议论型是对生活中的某一事情或情况现象谈自己的看法，发表议论。描写型或抒情型，则是对某人物事物的特征做细致的描述，或针对某事物抒发自己的感情。本文属于记事型日记。 二审格式：一般是在左上角记上当天日期，星期，时间的排列法与书信一致，星期写在日期之后；右上角写上当天的天气情况，表示天气情况的词一般是形容词，如：fine (晴朗的)，cold (寒冷的)，snowy(下雪)，sunny(阳光充足的)，rainy(下雨的)，cloudy(阴天的)等。日记的小标题写在下一行，也可省略不写。 三审人称和时态：写日记的时间一般是在下午、晚上，有时也可以在第二天补写。因此，日记中所记述的事情通常发生在过去，常用一般过去时；但当记述天气、描写景色或展望未来时，可以用一般现在时或一般将来时。本篇日记主要描写自己昨天的经历，故用第一人称，一般过去时。 第二步：提炼要点 1．go on a picnic 2．according to our plan 3．early in the morning 4．at the gate of our school 5．keep on riding 6．the foot/top of the mountain 7．have some pictures taken 8．go down the mountain 9．give out 第三步：扩点成句 1．Yesterday my classmates and I went on a picnic. 2. According to our plan we would climb the West Mountain. 3. Early in the morning all of us gathered at the gate of our school. 4. We kept on riding for an hour till we reached the foot of the mountain. 5. Soon we reached the top of the mountain. 6. We ran, sang，jumped, played chess，and had some pictures taken on the top of the mountain, and had lunch on rocks. 7. After lunch we went down the mountain. 8．All of us almost gave out. 【参考范文】 May 20th，WednesdayCloudy and drizzly Yesterday my classmates and I went on a picnic. According to our plan we would climb the West Mountain. Early in the morning all of us gathered at the gate of our school. We started at seven，and soon it began to have a little rain. We kept on riding for an hour till we reached the foot of the mountain. The little rain stopped then. We began to climb. Soon we reached the top of the mountain. How beautiful it was when we looked at the view from the top. We ran, sang，jumped, played chess，and had some pictures taken on the top of the mountain, and had lunch on rocks. How happy we were! After lunch we went down the mountain. We got home at four and all of us almost gave out. But I really enjoyed myself. 【亮点展示】 1．这是一篇记事型的日记，语言简洁明了，结构严谨，且能写出自己的内心感受，