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Scores: 90 Smoking Prepared for Jeff Academic English I Prepared by Nancy ZUCC ID:UW1304 Zhejiang University City College University of Waikato International Programme Due date: Nov. 21, 2013 Word Count: 505 Peer reviewer: kiki Outline Topic: smoking A: Smoking is a widespread but terrible habit worldwide. B: Increasingly people realize that smoking is harmful to their health. C: Because of its harmful effects, smoking should be forbidden in public places such as hospitals, schools, and stations. D: Therefore, this essay will discuss the harmful effects of smoking on smokers, people around them and the environment as a whole. Body 1: T: the disadvantages to smokers S: sickness, retch, dizziness and nausea S: cough S: cancer C: Therefore, smoking gradually damages to health of smokers. Body 2: T: the disadvantages to people around the smokers S: disease S: pregnant woman and the fetus S: teenagers C: Thus, smoking does harm to the health of people around the smokers. Body 3: T: the disadvantages to the local environment S: air polluted S: floating dust S: security risks C: As a result, smoke fog destroy the environment where people live. Conclusion: This essay introduced several different aspects of the disadvantages about smoking to smokers, the people around the smokers and the local environment. Summary: Smoking not only does harm to the health of people both smokers and non-smokers, physically and mentally, but also influence the living environment and reduce the living standard significantly. Final thought: In conclusion, smoking should be forbidden because of these various serious consequences. Smoking Smoking is a widespread but terrible habit worldwide. There are a large number of people who are accustomed to smoke and have an enormous problem to quit smoking. Practically, in the modern society, increasingly people realize that smoking is ha