【名师指津】2014高考英语复习课件：五句话写作（山东省武训高级中学）.pptVIP

我所遇到的问题? 词汇匮乏、表达不地道？ 怎样避开不会表达？ 写作如何避免时态的错误？ 基础写作如何整合信息？ 如何避免句子结构和句式单一？ 如何让阅卷老师瞬间发现亮点？ 优秀作文四大标准 S1:信息完整，正确 S2:书写整齐，清晰 S3:语法高级，贯通 S4:句型漂亮，地道 How to write a good composition 学会使用丰富的句式 多用复合句、及复杂句； 长短句结合、变换主语。 同位语，非谓语，从句， 倒装句，强调句，介词with结构 五句话秘籍——一主语多谓语写法 英语一句话只能有一个主谓结构 如果出现更多动词…？ 加连词（and / but / so…） 放入从句 变为非谓语动词 一主多谓（化腐朽为神奇！） 谓语动词/句型的要求 主被动关系 时间先后顺序 Example 化腐朽为神奇——用分词改写 教育经历： He Majored in Science. He graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies. Majoring in Science, he graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies. He was given the Nobel Prize for physics in 1921 He was invited to many countries to give lectures. The old woman died, leaving her son a large sum of money. The old woman died. She left her son a large sum of money. Liu Xiang won the Gold Medal in 110-meter-hurdle race in the Olympics. He became a super star and well-known across China. 如何让阅卷老师瞬间发现亮点？ Well begun is half done. All is well that ends well. 开头力争做到开门见山，直击要点； 结尾做到切合题意，不随意发挥。 * Reviewing 1.I heard my favorite play ___________（perform） again on the radio a few years ago. 2. He was made _______ (work) too hard. performed to work 3.Not ___________________(invite) to the party, he was greatly hurt. 4. The thief was caught ______ (steal ) in the store and taken to the police station. 5. The book _______ ( write )by Lu Xun is popular now . 6.The book ______(lie) on the desk was mine. having been invited stealing written lying 7.The old man walked in the street and_____________ (follow) by his son. 8. I lost my way in complete darkness and ,_______ (make) matters worse, it began to rain. was followed to make 技 巧 1. 学会使用丰富的句式 2. 学会使用较高级词汇 3. 学会使用适当的连词 句式丰富： 高级句型 分词作状语 从属复合句 并列复合句 简单句 v-ing/v-ed ＋1 定/状/名词性从句 ＋1 and,or,but 连接 ＋1 五大基本句型 ＋1 主语、谓语、宾语、定语、状语、