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201004论文翻译个人常见错误总结 分析:太中文化 原文示例: Aiming at the problem that the wireless sensor network (WSN) node is with limited energy and computing capabilities 修改后: Aiming at the problem that the energy and computing capabilities of the wireless sensor network (WSN) node is limited 分析:状语?使用方式错误。分词做状语 原文示例: A Real time success-Non-free-auction(RTS-NF-A) scheme is proposed with new policies are added into tradition auction scheme. 修改后: A Real time success-Non-free-auction(RTS-NF-A) scheme is proposed with new policies being added into tradition auction scheme. 分析:词性混淆。句式错误。And 连接两个句子，只省略主语不能省略谓语。 原文示例: the proposed scheme is in-time updating, flexibility, and ?high consultation rate of success 修改后: the proposed scheme is in-time updating, flexible and has high consultation rate of success 分析:状语从句的使用，句式不熟悉。 原文示例: WSN is a self organizing wireless network composed of a set of random geographically distributed sensor 修改后: WSN is a self organizing wireless network which is composed of a set of random geographically distributed sensor 分析:1，词性不对；2，句子结构混乱，不知所云。 原文示例: Task allocation is a broad area of high-performance computing research problems 修改后: Task allocation is an issue which is studied in high-performance computing broadly. 分析:句首大写。名词所有格。 原文示例: the traditional field of distributed algorithms can not be applied directly as wireless sensor network node capacity and capability is limited. 修改后: The traditional field of distributed algorithms can not be applied directly as wireless sensor network node’s capacity and capability is limited. 分析:冠词用法粗心。句子不完整，缺少谓语。 原文示例: WSN can be seen as a MAS if a sensor is regard as a agent. However, wireless sensor networks with high dynamics 修改后: WSN can be seen as a MAS if a sensor is regard as an agent. However, wireless sensor networks have high dynamics 分析:近义词的区分。 原文示例: WSN is similar with MAS due to?? that Sensors can handle problem indepentely and WSN is a distributed system with a self-organizing feature 修改后: WSN is similar with MAS because