英语译林版一轮课件：写作第16讲如何写事物说明文.pptxVIP

译林卷区版 英语第16讲　如何写事物说明文——说得清楚,看得明白一、魔法导航要“明明白白”地写好一篇事物说明文,准确地传递作者想要说明的信息,在写作中要注意以下几点:1.明确写作重点,突出语言特色。在写作时要抓住写作对象的本质或主要特征,选用准确、简明的语言,精确地对其说明。有时为了把文章写得通俗易懂、生动活泼,可以根据需要运用打比方、类比等修辞手段。2.选好说明顺序,用好说明方法。根据说明对象的不同灵活安排,运用时间、空间、逻辑等写作顺序,力求做到解说清楚、条理分明。另外,根据实际需要合理使用说明方法,突出说明对象的特征,努力达到“复杂事物简单化,抽象事物直观化,枯燥事物生动化”的效果。在写作中可灵活选用下定义、例证法、分类法、比较法、因果分析法、列数字、画图表、打比方等说明方法。二、常用句式(1)Nothing is more important than...(2)There are advantages and disadvantages...(3)Its obvious/apparent/clear that...(4)When it comes to...(5)There is no denying that...(6)Compared with A, B...(7)A is to B what C is to D(A对于B就像C对于D)(8)It is estimated/reported/believed that...(9)There are some special/unique functions...(10)There are certain factors I take into account...三、典题示例?真题在线(2014湖南)学校正在组织科技创新大赛,你想为日常生活中某件物品(如钢笔、书包、鞋子……)设计添加新功能来参赛。请以“My Magic?”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你的创意。内容:1.说明设计理由;2.介绍新功能。注意:1.词数不少于120个;2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。??????????审题谋篇文章体裁说明文中心人称第一人称主体时态一般现在时要点布局第一段:引入话题,如简要介绍创意产品的意义和用途等。第二段:说明设计理由。?第三段:介绍新功能。?阅卷现场考场作文:My Magic SchoolbagRecently I have designed a magic schoolbag. I would like to introduce ①its unique functions to you. Firstly, sometimes I forget to take what I need for the study, so I design a special button to check the schoolbag. It can remind me if I forget my textbooks, homework or something else. Secondly, it can be changed into a smaller one if not used. So it is convenient②of the user to carry it. Thirdly, the schoolbag is equipped with a GPS software and can help you find the cor-rect way when you lose your way. Lastly, my schoolbag can sing many songs. When you feel sleepy, you can press a yellow button and hear ③a exciting song. 文章提升:1.修改错误:1)its 是it is或it has的缩写形式,而不是it的形容词性物主代词,故应将①its改为?。2)convenient不是the user本身的特点,故应将②of改为?。3)exciting读音以元音音素开头,故将③a改为?。2.提升建议:将画线部分改为含非谓语动词作状语的句子:?参考范文:My Magic Water BottleMy magic water bottle will be a replacement of the traditional one which can change the tempera-ture of the inside water automatically with the outer environment changing. There are certain fa