【原创新课堂】2017春七年级英语下册 Unit 11 How was your school trip（第6课时）同步作文指导习题课件 （新版）人教新目标版.pptVIP

* 第六课时　单元同步作文指导 本单元以“学校旅行”为话题，主要描述旅行期间所发生事情的经过及自己的感受。具体到书面表达中要求同学们会写一篇关于学校旅行的文章，此文章以记叙为主，要说明事件的时间、地点、人物、经过和结果。在写作中，要分清主次，详略得当；另外，由于是写一次印象深刻的经历，故文中应有描述性的句子，比如描述人物的心理、感受、天气状况等。 教材中出现的相关句型： ①Today I went on a school trip.今天我进行了一次学校旅行。 ②I think todays school trip was terrible.我认为今天的学校旅行很糟糕。 ③We took the train to the museum.我们乘火车去博物馆。 ④We visited the science museum and it was really interesting.我们参观了科学博物馆，那真的很有趣。 ⑤I went to the gift shop and bought some lovely gifts for my parents.我去了礼品店给我父母买了一些可爱的礼物。 ⑥They werent expensive.它们不贵。 ⑦All in all，it was an exciting day.总的来说，是激动人心的一天。 ⑧I didnt like the trip at all.我一点也不喜欢这次旅行。 昨天你刚经历了一次学校旅行，请以“My School Trip”为题，写一篇50词左右的作文，记述你昨天的活动和感受。 My School Trip Yesterday was a sunny day.My school went to the zoo.It was really interesting.We went there by bus.The zoo is very big.At the zoo，I saw lots of animals and I took many photos.I learned a lot about animals.My classmates and I also went to the gift shop and bought some gifts.They werent expensive.It was an exciting day. 【点评】开篇由yesterday表明时间为一般过去时。使用形容词interesting来描述事件的感情基调，吸引读者。点明去目的地的方式，并把动物园之行的活动记叙清楚明了。末尾exciting一词描述了自己的感受。 *