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for The Thorn Bird by Colleen McCulloughby 孙君娣 徐敏 原文—— THE THORN BIRD ，Colleen McCullough,外语教学与研究出版社，1996.05 曾版——《荆棘鸟》，曾胡，译林出版社，1989.07 陈版——《荆棘鸟》，晓明 陈明锦 译，漓江出版社，1983 逻辑问题 一 、与事实不符 1、He squeezed her skin in opposite directions until it stretched whitely… 曾版：她向相反的方向揪着她的皮肤，直到拉出了一道白缝。 陈版：他将她的手反转过去，直到她的皮肤变得青白。 2、her pale bosom peeped out of a foaming fichu of cream lace fastened with a pearl pin. 曾版：上面掇满了珠子，别着珠花别针的米黄色三角披肩围巾下隐隐的显露出她白色的胸脯。 陈版：那白皙的胸部露出了一块用珠针别着的，饰有奶黄色花边的三角披肩围巾。 二 、词义选择 多义词选择词义 1、Frank had driven his mother into Wahine to buy Meggies doll, and he was still wondering what had prompted her to do it. 曾版：梅吉的布娃娃是弗兰克撺掇他妈妈到波利尼西亚的杂货店里买来的，可到现在他也不甚明白是什么驱使她去那样做的。 陈版：是弗兰克驾车把母亲送到瓦西尼去为麦琪买娃娃的，他至今还弄不清究竟是什么因素促使她这么做。 （注：*vehicle[transitive always + adverb/preposition] to take someone somewhere in a car, truck etc： *make somebody do something [transitive] to strongly influence someone to do something drive somebody to do something ——Longman ） 2、Her face was swollen, her eyes running; 曾版：她鼓起脸蛋，眼睛眨巴着。 陈版：她的脸肿了，眼睛里满是泪水。 用词程度过大与原文表述不对等 1、Frank worked on the doll without raising his head, but as the pile of plates grew he got up silently to fetch a towel and began to dry them. Moving between the worktable and the dresser, he worked with the ease of long familiarity. It was a furtive, fearful game he and his mother played, for the most stringent rule in Paddys domain concerned the proper delegation of duties. 曾版：弗兰克头也不抬地修着那个布娃娃，可是在盘子摄得越来越高的时候，他默不做声地站起身来，取下一条毛巾，把盘子擦干。他在圆桌和碗柜之间来回走着，带着对这种劳作久已熟悉的轻巧神情。他和他的妈妈是冒天下之大韪。 陈版：他和母亲之间玩着诡秘而又可怕的事情 改： 秘密而又危险的事情 2、They took no notice of Meggie as she stood crying; it did not occur to her to seek help, for in the Cleary family those who could not fight their own battles got scant aid or sympathy, and that went for girls, too. 曾版：她没想到要寻求什么帮助，因为在克利里家里不为自己去争斗的人是得不到什么帮助和同情的，女孩子们也概莫能外。 陈版：克利阿里家里，懦夫是得不到同情的，就是女孩子也不例外。 上位词与下位词 1、She played happily with the whistles