江苏省第十中学中考英语《写作》课件.pptVIP

What is his problem? * . How to improve your writing * Learning goals: ＊ learn how to make our writing more beautiful； ＊know how to score our writing; ＊try to help people in need . By the end of the lesson, we can *  Help 我在写作方面有许多问题。 I have many problems in writing. 我不知道如何来解决他们。 I don’t know how to deal with them. I don’t know what to do with them. 你能给我一些建议吗？ Can you give me some advice? Can you offer me some suggestions? 你的建议会很有价值。 Your advice will be of great value . Your suggestions will be very valuable . with Tip 1. To be a careful writer * linking words（连接词） I have many problems in writing. I don’t know how to deal with them. Can you give me some advice? Your advice will be of great value . ∨ But, However, How to make it more beautiful ? Discuss in pairs: ∧ I hope, I believe, y * 表转折：but, _______________________… 表递进：and, ______________________… 表顺序：first, ______________________… 表观点：I think,____________________… besides however second, third,…,finally in my opinion Can you tell him more linking words(连接词)? ,what’s more ,although, though Tip 2.To be a thoughtful writer * ★Appearance ( neat handwriting and paragraphs) is important. * Tip 1.To be a careful writer Tip 2.To be a thoughtful writer proverb 谚语 Tip 3.To be a wise writer Tip 3.To be a wise writer Practice makes perfect. No pains, no gains. What should we pay attention to if we want to make our writing more beautiful? Appearance is very important. * The scoring standard（作文评分标准） Marks Appearance Contents 内容 Languages Excellent 17-20 ★★★ complete fluent, linking words, well-organized Good 13-16 ★★ complete or most of the points almost fluent, few linking words, some mistakes Ok 9-12 ★ most of the points more mistakes Poor 0-8 only a few related words or sentences more and more mistakes * Discussion: (in group of four) What problems do you have? * B)假如你是第一中学的张磊，随着中考的日益临近，你压力也越来越大，问题也越来越多。请根据以下所给的提示，以“My problems”为题写一篇小短文进行倾诉。 提示： 1. What problems do yo