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Pragmatic failure in discourse Inaccurate tone unclear standpoint Ungrounded ideas Unnecessary details bad conclusion Inaccurate tone In my view, college pressure has become a part of our college life. What we should do is to adapt ourselves to it. We should try our best to overcome it. Only in this way can we make our college life more colorful. Only in this way can we do sth.的句式在中国学习者习作的结尾部分经常出现，但该句式的语气过于绝对，不如说by doing sth.或干脆不用这样的句式。同时，本例中还存在前文讨论过的其他问题，如用词的冗余和句子的冗余。本例可改为In my view, college pressure has become a part of our life. What we should do is to adapt ourselves to it and finally ov