广东省花县2016高考英语二轮复习 书面表达（点睛）浏览（1.doc

2016（广东）花县高考英语（二轮）书面表达（点睛）浏览（1） 2016书面表达选练 某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中任何一个数据中反映的情况写出你的一个看法。词数100词左右。 生词：图表：chart课余活动：after-class activities 【广东省揭阳市2014读写任务 (共1小题，满分25分) 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 One day, while she was walking in the woods, a girl found two starving songbirds. She took them home and put them in a small cage. She cared them with love and the birds grew strong. Every morning they greeted her with a wonderful song. The girl felt great love for the birds. One day the girl left the door to the cage open. The larger and stronger of the two birds flew from the cage. The girl was so frightened that he would fly away. As he flew close, she grasped him wildly. Her heart felt glad at her success in capturing him. Suddenly she felt the bird go limp. She opened her hand and stared in horror at the dead bird. Her desperate love had killed him. 　She noticed the other bird moving back and forth on the edge of the cage. She could feel his great need for freedom. He needed to soar into the clear, blue sky. She lifted him from the cage and tossed him softly into the air. The bird circled once, twice, three times. 　　The girl watched delightedly at the birds enjoyment. Her heart was no longer concerned with her loss. She wanted the bird to be happy. Suddenly the bird flew closer and landed softly on her shoulder. It sang the sweetest melody that she had ever heard. 　　She finally realized that the fastest way to lose love is to hold on it too tight, the best way to keep love is to give it WINGS! [写作内容] 1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点； 2. 然后以约120个词就 “爱就要放手” 这一主题发表看法，并包括如下要点： a) 以自己为例，简述生活中你父母对你的过度关注； b) 你父母的做法对你造成了什么不良的影响； c) 如果有机会，你会就此问题对父母说些什么 [写作要求] 1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。 2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [评分标准] 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。 【参考答案】 【解析】 试题分析：本文属于读写任务写作，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真看清题目要求，这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容，要求有很高的概括提炼的能力，要抓住文章的主题，再以约120个词写一篇短文，按照要点去表达，不能有遗漏，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。写作