BasicWriting选编.ppt

1.Cover all the given information. * Basic Writing Polishing your sentence structure How to express the following sentences in English? 子轩,你有种,我要给你点颜色看看 Pre-writing Zixuan CHEN, you have seed and I will give you some color to see see. Zi, you dare to offend me. I will teach you a lesson. 土豪章！你给我站住。 Tu Hao, Zhang, you give me stop! Hey, you vulgar man, stop! 第三者, Wilson, 心花怒放！ heart flower angry open The third party,Wilson,is wild with joy. What makes a good piece of five-sentence writing? Brainstorm 勿漏要点 2. Avoid grammar mistakes and wrong spelling 错误零容忍 3. Try to be coherent. 连贯性 4. Use the words idiomatically 地道用词 5. Write your article tidily. 书写整洁 6. Vary your expressions. 词汇多样化 7. Use proper grammar items. 语法规则灵活化 8. Avoid Chinglish. 中式英语请勿用 Writing in class: Shining sentence structures. 当他们到达德国时, 受到热烈欢迎 When they arrived in Germany, they receive a warm reception. On arriving in Germany, they receive a warm reception Upon their arrival in Germany, they receive a warm reception Kimmi咬着嘴唇盯着我思考着下一步该怎么办。 With his lips bitten, Kimmi gazed at me, wondering what to do next. Rule 1 Use preposition phrases. 听到偶像金秀贤来珠海一中的消息，Wilson热泪盈眶。 Hearing his idol, Kim Soo Hyun, will come to Zhuhai, Wilson couldn’t hold back his tears of excitement. 地 点：校图书馆一楼 占地面积：约300平方米 展馆历史：40多年 校史展览馆 2013年深圳一模 Located/Situated on the 1st floor of the library, the school exhibition hall, covers an area of approximately 300 square meters with a long history of more than forty years. Rule 2 Use non-predicate verbs. 非谓语 Haikui 台风海葵导致灾难性的结果：成千上万的房屋倒塌 2013六校一联 The typhoon Haikui gave rise to a disastrous result that hundreds of thousands of houses collapsed. Rule 3 Use appositive clause. 同位语 It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife. 很明显只有通过国际合作, 才能找到黑匣子。 It is obvious that only through international cooperation and joint efforts, can the black box of MH370 be found in time. Rule 4 Use “it” structur