书面表达常见错误概要.ppt

高考书面表达高频错误分析 The greatest mistake you can make in life is to be continually fearing you will make one.? When you realize youve made a mistake, make amends immediately.? Its easier to eat crow while its still warm.? 一天来了个老外，进到办公室，前台小姐左看右看，大家都在打游戏，只有自己比较清闲，面带微笑的 前台小姐：“Hello.” 老外：“Hi.” 前台小姐：“You have what thing?” 老外：“Can you speak English？” 前台小姐：“If I not speak English, I am speaking what” 老外：“Can anybody else speak English? 前台小姐：“You yourself look. All people are playing, no people have time, you can wait, you wait, you not wait, you go！ 老外：“Good heavens. Anybody here can speak English？” 前台小姐 “Shout what shout, quiet a little, you on earth have what thing ?” 老外：“I want to speak to your head.” 前台小姐：“Head not zai. You tomorrow come！ Show Time: UNION is POWER 关系不一致 词性混淆 用词累赘 选词或搭配不当 逻辑错误 Common mistakes 不合英语表达习惯 句子缺乏统一连贯性 汉式英语 标点符号及大小写错误 所谓意义一致，不仅知主谓在人称或数上一致，还应取决于主语所表达的实际意义。 If she have much money, she can buy many things that she want. 1. 关系不一致 has wants 2. 词性混淆 When people have difficult, we should help them. 英语句子的各个成分都是由一定词性的词来充当的. 记单词光记拼写、读音和词义，忽视词性是不可取的. difficulty 3. 用词累赘 If you lend me 50 dollars, I’ll repay back you next week. 要避免 “累赘” 现象这一现象的发生，必须加强语言基本功训练，学习中要勤思多练，同时熟记一些易于出现“累赘”现象的单词和语句。 4. 选词或搭配不当 Peter is a warm-hearted person, so everybody likes to have friends with him. 在理解英语词汇时, 要熟悉它们的习惯搭配。平时学习词汇时，要仔细思考，勤查词典，尤其要多记英语解释，弄清它们的确切意思和用法，以免造成类似错误。 make 5. 逻辑错误 Liu Hua is a kind-hearted girl; she will be successful in anything she tries. 在写作时，不少学生从语言角度考虑得多，而从逻辑角度考虑得少,但英语中强调正确的逻辑关系。 As she has a strong will and confidence in herself, Liu Hua may be successful in anything she tries. 6. 不合英语表达习惯 The price of oil is more expensive than before. 要避免此类错误的发生，平时训练就要多比较、归纳英汉两种语言在表达方式上的差异。 higher 7. 句子缺乏统一性 To control the birth rate in the world, scientists are looking for new sources of energy. 统一性要求一个句子必须表达一个单一的完整思想。 To control the birth rate in the world, all the governments must