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浙江奉化市2016高考英语书面表达选编（3）及参考范文 2016书面表达训练 请以“The enefits of Failure”为题，结合自己的经历，写一篇短文发表到校英语报上。要点如下： 1．列举实例； 2.认识变化； 3.态度转变。 注意：1.词数120 字左右; 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.参考词汇：激励 motivate The Benefits of Failure Although nobody wants to experience failure, failure plays an important role on the way to success. Sometimes, failure can benefit us a lot. When I failed my English exam last term, I felt upset at first, but then I made up my mind to study even harder .It was that failure that motivated me to put more time and energy into learning this subject. What’s more, I found it was my small vocabulary and poor grammar that led to my failure. So I changed my learning methods. Finally I made greater progress in English than before. Most importantly, now I have a correct attitude towards failure. All in all, failure is the mother of success. It really helped me to get closer to success. 【思路点拨】范文开篇点题使用了短语“play an important role, on the way to ”。紧接着，按照写作要求，结合自己亲身经历举例证明失败的好处。在举例时对时态的把握准确，对过去事情的描述用一般过去时。使用了一系列衔接词“at first ,but then What’s more, Finally ,Most importantly”，句与句之间衔接自然顺畅。最后，用名人名言“失败乃成功之母”点明文章主题。范文句式多变。When引导的时间状语从句, 强调句型It was that failure that motivated me to put more time and energy into learning this subject。 书面表达 2014·江西省南昌市高三二模iPad已成为中学生的新宠，它不仅可以听音乐，阅读电子书，而且还可以玩电子游戏。假如你是南昌某高中学生李华，请你用英语给英语报社写一封信，谈谈你对自己周围学生使用iPad的情况的看法。信的内容必须包括以下几点： 1．使用iPad对学习的好处； 2．对课堂纪律和学习可能产生的负面影响； 3．提出自己的建议。 注意：词数120左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Editor， I’m a senior high school student in Nanchang，named Li Hua.Now many students have iPads and think it’s a fashion to use them. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely， Li Hua Dear Editor， I’m a senior high school student in Nanchang，named Li Hua.Now many students have iPads and think it’s a fashion to use them.Using an iPad，we can listen to music，download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen.Apparentl