2014届高三英语二轮专题提升：短文改错52.docVIP

2014届高三英语二轮专题提升：短文改错 1.短文改错 This morning my parents took my sister and me to the zoo. At the noon we had a picnic on the grass. I eat too much, so I couldn’t finish my sandwich. As I didn’t know what to do with it, I asked my sister for advices. She pointed at the notice, that said, “ No litter.” And she asked me throw the sandwich into the litter-basket. Just then I saw an elephant coming slow towards us. Suddenly an idea came into her mind. I could feed the elephant by my sandwich and I did so in the end. Seen this, my sister smiled and said, “What clever you are!” 2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. Finally, there was only one family among us and the ticket counter. This family made deep impression on me. There were eight children, both probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn’t have a lot of money. Their clothes was not expensive, and they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of us standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, held hands. They were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants and another performances where that they would see that night. Everyone could sense they have never been to the circus before. 3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加: 在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。 修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。 We all have a strong desire to succeed. For some the desire is great than that of the average people. In fact, everyone wants to be successful so very few are willing to pay the price of hard working. Success is an attitude and has no really secrets. It all start with your belief system. Your belief system starts with what you feel about your