英语高考满分作文亮点分析.doc

一. 用词准确;表达地道 　【北京卷】　　【试题回放】　　第一节情景作文(20分) 　　美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。 　　注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。　　2.词数不少于60。 　　Dear Jeff, 　　I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School 　　While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun. 　　If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience. 　　Best wishes, 　　Li Hua 　　[名师点评] 　　这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的，第一，作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充实而丰富，结构紧凑，有层次感;第二，本文没有采用华丽的辞藻，但用词十分恰当，段落过渡自然，令人耳目一新。 【安徽卷】【试题回放】 　　假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下： 　　l 表示赞成。 　　l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 　　l 简要说明理由。 　　注意：　　1. 词数100左右。　　 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。　　 3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。　　4. 参考栏目：栏目—column 　　Dear Mr. Green, 　　I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that. 　　Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can