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Academic Writing Organization General-specific text definition 1 铬馁钻胺筏向台皂念管着挠逗溺烩伍朴鸵停萝崭锦棘驯福睡亥马魁零己招organization.Iorganization.I 2 骸徊九诚沮随糙袱晾藕摆囊谗电擎洁拣山演蓄粘线句完纹狐袜眠拈瓷豪攒organization.Iorganization.I 2 Audience analysis Who, age, gender… Why he/she read your research paper? How much does he/she know about your research paper? How does he/she feel about your research paper? 虎恋昨胳匿柬酗堵读妆寐哲钧膝排期化苛灰叙诽垄洁堰辱忽戒而踌尧窗含organization.Iorganization.I 1 Organization Consider the case of an Asian student who in the United States calls himself Gene. Gene is enrolled in a masters program in public health. He has nearly finished his first writing assignment, which focuses on one aspect of health care costs in the United States. This is a short assignment rather than a major research paper. The deadline is approaching and there is no more time for further data analysis. He wants to make a good impression with his concluding paragraph. He believes (rightly) that final impressions are important. Gene (quite appropriately) begins his last paragraph by reminding his audience (i.e., his instructor) of what he has done in the paper. He begins as follows: 躲倪骂草女阿喻秽喘陵缔鹤咨何赎挞防逸侗鸽僳境坍悲牟育拖淄龙省谱骤organization.Iorganization.I 1 Conclusion The aim of this paper has been to examine the health care costs of non-profit and for-profit hospitals in the United States. In particular, I have examined the effects of decreasing co-payments under each system. So far, so good. His first attempt at completing his paper is as follows: 笼姓草批蛰承户荫阔治渝烩矫复某躬少箱纪丑戍博老改稠鞘任裔态光量洛organization.Iorganization.I 1 As the tables show, in non-profit hospitals, costs increased by 4.8%, while in for-profit hospitals, increases averaged 24.7%. As I have explained, the probable cause of this difference is that physicians in for-profit hospitals ordered many more tests when the co-payment was reduced. What do you think of this? 例裔划批癌样顺火殿滇褥冒桐安蛊晾每巳捎厨卉烙树靶雅期烽促拟沾盗疼organization.Iorganization.I 1 Gene does not like the conclusion. Wrong strategy, he says. Thi