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五月雅思写作回顾 CETS+ FPRI Cooperation/Competition/Culture/Communication/Creativity/Chance/Confidence/Cost Education/Economy/Environment/Efficiency/Emotion/Entertainment/Equality/Experience(s)/Effect Time/Technology/Thinking ?Society/Satisfaction/Stability/Spirit/System/Skill/Safety/Sharing/Success ?Family/Friendship/Fairness/Focus/Failure Personal development/Physical and psychological health/Pressure/Personality/Punishment/Preparation/Progress Right/Responsibility/Respect/Relaxation/Result/Reliability ?Insight Influence Innovation 五月十日小作文不出所料考了流程图，大作文是：some people think since women now have full-time jobs as men do, it is necessary for men to share some housework. To what extent do you agree or disagree?? 女权主义抬头的又一个鲜活的例子。我想啊想啊想啊想，好像想不出来反对的理由耶。所以，所以，所以，所以，那就完全赞同呗。你怎么知道给你阅卷的是不是一个女权主义战士呢？两害相权取其轻，两利相权取其重。从五十个角度里找三条支持的理由应该不难吧？ 首段：背景--男女工作 主题--男性承担家务 目的：必须的 第二段理由一： family--促进更加和谐的家庭关系呗。 第三段理由二： responsibility--这也是男性应该承担的责任啊。 第四段理由三： fairness--男性做一些家务也是公平原则的体现啊。 五月十五小作文又是bar chart。大作文：Employers should give their staff at least four weeks‘ holidays a year to make employees do better at their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree？ 先来回忆下预测第八题： 8. Some people think working is the most important aspect of life and without it, life becomes meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 分析：既然出现了most,一般情况而言写倾向反驳会好写些。即：先有个让步来说说工作对于生活来讲为什么重要？再来说说为什么很难讲它是最重要的？ 第一段：背景：工作 主题：工作和生活关系 目的：我认为它对生活来说很重要，但很难说是最重要。 第二段：让步段。A. money—earn one’s butter and bread/raise family—工作让一个人赚钱生存并能养家糊口 –in other words, working is at least one of the prerequisites of living. B. value—工作能体现一个人的价值。而这对于取得生活中的sense of satisfaction而言至关重要。??从这两点上来说，without working, 生活至少失去了一些色彩。 第三段：主体段。In spite of this, 宣称说工作最重要且没它生命就没有了意义仍然显得questionable。A. working is part of life而不是生活的全部。Other factors like family relationships, friendship, love and faith对于生活而言也很重要。B. 一些没有常规意义上的working的人的生活也很colorful and meaningful.—wealthy people—volunteer and donation—他们的生活也不至于就完全没有意义。C. working—re