[名校联盟]河南省灵宝市第三高级中学2013-2014学年高二英语导学案30：Unit16.Writing A Day When Everything Went Wrong.docVIP

Step Ⅰ Lead in Do you love stories? What factors should be included in a story? What ?who ?where ?when Step Ⅱ Reading Task 1. What will you write about when you see the title A Day When Everything Went Wrong? You can write about every bad thing you have experienced, such as losing something important, hurting your leg, being late for school, failing an exam Task 2. Read Draft A of a students composition on the topic A Day When Everything Went Wrong. Question: How many events are mentioned in the story? I Walked to school; I forgot the poetry competition I came last in the poetry reading competition; I spilled water on my pillow Read Draft A and find the other factors of the story Why: No school bus; not prepared the competition Feelings: 燭iresome; awkward Task 3. Read Draft B and C to tell which one is better. What does the writer add in Draft C? In Draft B, the writer uses linking words and adds some details and specific information to attract the attention of the reader. Besides, the order of events is clearer and the language is more vivid. Linking words 并列 ???and, ?both…and , not only…but also…, as well as, neither…nor…, ????????Either…or…, 转折 ???but, ?however, yet, though 因果 ???so, ?because , ?as a result, therefore, 时间 ???when, while, as, since, until, till, as soon as, no sooner…than, hardly…when, ???????????????the instant/minute/second/moment, before, after, every/each time, at the same time, meanwhile 目的 ?in order to, ?so as to, ?so that, ?in order that 其他 ?suddenly, ?unfortunately, so…that… , first, in the end, on the one hand…on the other hand, StepⅢ. Homework Write what happened on your way to school in your reference book, P38. Layout ?introduction ??beginning of the narrative ?development of the narrative ?conclusion _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________