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广东肇庆市2016高考英语二轮书面表达借鉴集（7）及参考范文 （2014广东卷）第二节 读写任务（共1小题；满分25分） 阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Oseola McCarty spent more than 75 years washing and ironing other people’s clothes. As a laundrywoman, she was paid only a few dollars each time. Certainly nobody would consider her rich, so they were all amazed when Miss McCarty decided to donate $ 150,000 to the University of Southern Mississippi. The money was i … me savings. She could save such a large amount of money because she lived a very simple life. She never learned to drive, and when she wanted to go somewhere, she just walked. She never flew to anywhere till the donation（捐助），and in 50 years she had been out of the South only once. The house in which she lived was also a rather modest one her last uncle left her. Only after she became known in America did she begin to travel all over the country. Since then, she had been the subject of many interviews and articles and was even invited to the White House. Her donation was for students who clearly needed financial help. She herself left school in the sixth grade and had never married or had children. She said to the reporters that the idea of helping somebody’s child go to college gave her much pleasure. [写作内容] 用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。 用约120个词就Miss McCarty的捐助谈谈你的想法，内容包括： 你如何看待她的捐助行为； 你认为她的捐助对受惠学生有哪些影响； 如果你自己要捐助，你会选择哪个群体并陈述理由。 [写作要求] 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。 作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [评分标准] 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。 【考点】考察任务型写作 【写作指导】 本文要求首先叙述短文内容：别人眼里很贫穷的却为别人捐了$ 150,000。该部分一定要简洁扼要，不要使用过多的复杂句式，容易超过字数限制。 然后就如何看待她的捐助行为，捐助行为的影响，以及如果你捐助，你会选择什么群体。分别展开阐述。本文是是由一般现在时，在谈自己的看法时使用第一人称。考生可以用自己的亲身经历为例进行详细说明。 本文给考生自由发挥的余地很大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。 【参考范文】 【河北省唐山一中】 书面表达（满分25分） 作为中学生，你肯定经历过多次考试，体验过成功，也遭遇过失败。请你根据提示内容，简要概述中学生中普遍存在的对考试失败的两种态度，并结合自身实际，说明你的观点。 消极态度 积极态度 你的结论 当考试结果不尽人意时，情绪低落，丧失信心，不再继续努力。 考试失败是 …… …… 要求：（1）题目自拟； （2）词数：100-120。 【参考范文】书面表达： Failure is the mother of success We middle sch