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备考2010写作专题3 记叙文 重点诠释： 记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事物的发展变化的过程为主的一种文体。 在记叙文体的高考书面表达中，命题形式主要是提纲式或图表式。 通常要求考生以第一人称或第三人称来写作，第一人称主要是写自己的经历，第三人称主要是写他人的经历或事迹。 由于记叙文叙述的事情通常发生在过去，因而，其时态主要用一般过去时。 记叙文通常是按照事情发展的先后顺序来表达内容的。 写作典例： 请仔细看一下下面的图画，注意图画中的细节： 假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你的目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。 ?　　 注意：1、目击者应该准确报告事实； 2、词数100左右； 3、结尾已为你写好 剖析：本题图文结合，审题时要重视细节。 1 明确写作要求： 本题要求写一篇目击者的报告，用第一人称写； 2 认真审图，确认全部信息要点： ①图中的环境条件； ②人物位置（此点对完成本题十分重要）； ③人物活动； ④人物表情； ⑤空间结构； ⑥图中的全部附加文字（英语和汉语）。 3 确定内容要点： ①时间：2000年2月8日早晨7点15分； ②地点：公园路公园门前； ③我正沿公园路向东走； ④一辆汽车从第3街向右拐，驶入公园路时撞倒了一位过街的老人； ⑤汽车未停，沿公园路向西开走； ⑥汽车是黄色的，车牌号是AC864，司机是一位女性。 One Possible version: It was 7 : 15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didnt stop but drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864. About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. 针对训练： 请仔细看一下下面的图画，注意图画中的细节： Pollution does harm to us all! A chemical factory lies near my home. The manager was criticized by the government because the factory gave out lots of harmful smoke every day, but he paid no attention. Then the factory was forced to stop production and the manager said angrily, “Is there any evidence to show that we did harm to people’s health? In fact, we haven’t.” Just then, a doctor came, with the result of the medical exam, saying the manager was suffering a lung cancer. It is very clear that the pollution has harmed not only the people around the factory but also the manager himself. The manager regretted having caused so much pollution. Now he has realized the importance of keeping the air clean. 2．根据图画写一篇短文，叙述某天小明与其妈妈发生的故事。