2016年高考英语短文改错集训营课件：高考英语短文改错2——记叙文1.pptVIP

(五) My hometown is Brighton where isn’t a very big town. It’s in the coast about 50 miles from London and has a population of 300,000. Certainly it isn’t as interested as London. So the air is a lot of cleaner because there’s little pollution here. But interesting on which/that There’re few factories in Brighton, but not many. So, it isn’t easy to find a job there. My father used to working in a factory which shuts down a year ago and my father lost his job. shut work here a There’re many hotels and languages schools in the town. In summer the town is full of travelers. My father has decided to open a small gift shop. language (五)本文作者介绍了自己的家乡——Brighton。 1. where→ which/that 引导定语从句，并在从句中充当主语。 2. in→ on 由固定短语on the coast意为“在海岸线上”可知。 3. interested→ interesting 主语是it，故用interesting。 4. So→ But 根据上下文逻辑关系可知此处显然存在转折关系，故用But。 5. 去掉a lot后的of 此处并不是表“很多”，而a lot放在比较级前表“……得多”的意思，故去掉of。 6. 在few前加a 根据后面的but not many可知此处应该是指“有一些”，而不是“few(几乎没有)”，故在few前加a。 7. there→ here 作者是介绍自己的家乡，要用here才符合逻辑。 8. working→ work 由固定词组used to do…意为“过去曾经……”可知。 9. shuts→ shut 由后面的a year ago可知要用过去时。 10. languages→ language 通常名词作定语不用复数形式。 coast n. 海岸 used to 过去曾经 shut down 倒闭 gift shop 礼品店 lose one’s job 失业 has a population of… 有……人口 (六) Dear dad and mum, I have been very happy in the school. I work hardly in the school every day. After class, I play with my classmates. I spend a lot time doing my homework. of hard After lunch, I play the ping-pong with my friends. Then, I spend some time read my English note. At six o’clock, I have my evening class. After that, I had some spare time. At eight o’clock, I go to bed. have notes reading This is a day in the school. Mum, you always tell us “Happiness is vital of our life.” And I want to be happy every day. If you are not happy, call me please or if I am not happy, I will call you either.