2007年度广东高考基础写作高分技巧.docVIP

2007年广东高考基础写作高分技巧 ??????? ????????? ?? ------------ 作者：王希文 刘淼??发布时间：2007-5-14?? 一、合理谋篇布局???? 基础写作题无论是哪种体裁或形式,都要求正确地梳理文中要点,合理地谋篇布局,即构思短文框架。首先要思考将哪些信息放到同一个句子中,其次是将信息进行合理的排列,确定信息表达的顺序,最后考虑是否需要划分段落等。范例:???? [写作内容]???? 假如你是某英文报社小记者,请根据下列表格内容,写一篇记叙文。???? ????[写作要求]???? 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容,短文标题已给出。??????????????? Forest Fire in the Northeast???? ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? [谋篇构思]???? 此题要求写一篇关于火灾的记叙文,写作时应注意记叙文的写作特点,即短文要包括时间、地点、人物、事件的经过和结果等要素。???? 另外必须确定时间的立足点。描写火灾的经过时应使用一般过去时,而说明其影响时可使用一般现在时、现在进行时或一般将来时。???? 短文内容可以这样构思:第一句可以把时间、地点、火灾原因这三个信息综合在一起；第二句交代参加救援人员；第三句综合持续时间、伤亡情况、经济损失这三方面信息；第四句介绍火灾影响(引起当地政府和中央领导的关注)；第五句可适当发挥,增补一句应采取措施避免类似事件发生,以使短文的结尾更加自然。???? 短文内容(火灾的发生、发展和结果)可以一气呵成,只使用一个段落,这样可使内容更加紧凑。[参考范文]?????????????????????????? Forest Fire in the Northeast ???? (1) On April 10th, 2007, a fire broke out in a forest in the northeast of our country, which was caused by a few tourists who had had a picnic in the forest. (2) Tens of thousands of firefighters, soldiers and local people fought bravely against the fire until it was finally put out. (3) The fire lasted for more than a week, causing a loss of at least 200 million yuan, and more seriously, two people were killed in the fire and tens of people were injured. (4) Not only are the leaders of the central government much concerned about the fire, but also the local government is thinking about the lesson they get from the fire. (5) As a consequence, further safety measures should be surely taken to avoid things like this. 二、选择高级词汇???? 用词准确、得体是写作的前提,在此基础上使用高级词汇及短语,既可以体现写作者的语言驾驭能力,又有助于获得高分。范例:???? 1. The woman manager didn’t come to the concert yesterday because she was ill. (一般)The woman manager’s illness accounted for her absence from the concert yesterday. (高级)???? 2. Dear sir, I will thank you if you consider my application. (一般)Dear sir, I’ll appreciate it if you can take my appl