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2014届高考英语二轮复习：书面表达 (2013·安徽卷) 假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明,从我做起”为主题的征文活动,请你以“On the Way to School”为题,写一篇英语短文。 内容主要包括: 1.遵守交通法规; 2.注意举止文明。 注意:1.词数120左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 4.短文的题目已为你拟好,不计入总词数 On the Way to School ? 【参考范文】 On the Way to School These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone. As for me, it should start on my way to school. I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bike, I’ll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, I’ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, I will regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere. I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. I hope my behavior will make a difference. (2013·山东卷) 第二节:写作(满分30分) 假设你是新华中学的学生李华, 你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件, 询问你暑假里的打算, 但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件: 1.未及时回信的原因; 2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。 注意:1.词数:120~150; 2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 【试题点评】 今年的书面表达题目延续山东省一贯的提纲作文命题习惯, 时隔一年之后重新回到“书信题”的大框架中, 考了一篇“以道歉信为外因, 以活动安排为主体段”的提纲作文, 相当于2010年山东卷(道歉信)和2007年四川卷(假期安排)的合体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习的, 因此套路很完善、套话很丰富。此外, 本文中需要同学们翻译的难句不多, 因此, 只要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考英语作文的提分方法, 掌握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型和过渡词, 并加以针对性训练, 这篇应该不难写。 【经典套路】 第一段:问候+写信背景+写信目的 第二段:“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”) 第三段:“假期安排”部分 第四段:补充说明+客套话 【高分范文】 Dear Tom, How is everything going on with you? (问候)You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation. (写信背景)I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay. (写信目的) How I wish I would read and reply to your e-mail as soon as I received it. Ho