2017届高三英语一轮 专题撬分练 专题14 短文改错.docVIP

短文改错 ……………………………………………… ……………………………………………… 基础组Correction 1 限时：6分钟 [2016·衡水二中仿真]I like traveling and my dream of paying a visit for our capital city Beijing came true during the National Day holiday this year. I went to Tiananmen Square with my parents on October 1, which we watched a flag－raising ceremony. While I watched the flag rising slow, I sang the national anthem to music, feeling extremely exciting. Then we go to some other famous tourist attraction, like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proud, thought of the old saying that “He who dont climb the Great Wall is not a true man.” Although I was tired, but I really had a good time. 答案　 I like traveling and my dream of paying a visit our capital city Beijing came true during the National Day holiday this year. I went to Tiananmen Square with my parents on October 1, we watched flag－raising ceremony. While I watched the flag rising ， I sang the national anthem to music, feeling extremely . Then we to some other famous tourist ， like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proud, of the old saying that “He who climb the Great Wall is not a true man.” Although I was tired, I really had a good time. Correction 2 限时：7分钟 [2016·枣强中学期中]There is common phenomenon nowadays which parents arrange everything for their children and try to pave the way for their success. That is of greatly concern. Im strongly opposed of this kind of “love”. For one thing, children become very reliant on their parents that they fail to have independent thoughts or creative idea. For another, overprotecting the children or giving out too much care is extremely bad for our development in the future. I think only by encouraging the children to overcome difficulties and developing by themselves can they grow up to being independent and become truly successful. 答案　 There is common phenomenon nowadays parents arrange everything for their chi