2017年高考英语一轮 24 写好长句的技巧课件 新人教版.ppt

* 基础写作要求考生用5句话表达全部内容，因为一篇基础写作题中通常有七八个信息点，要用五个句子表达出来，就是需要考生能写好长句。长句的手段一般包括：使用从句(主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、同位语从句、定语从句、状语从句)、介词短语、同位语、非谓语动词、插入语等。这里着重练习介绍人物、节日及建筑物的长句写法。 写好长句的技巧 用一句话表达下列信息点。 姓名：李明 职务：班长 外貌特征：个子高 性格特点：很活跃 在介绍人物的身份、外貌和性格特征等时可用以下方法： 方法1：同位语 Li Ming, (who is) a tall, healthy and active boy, is our monitor. 经典例题 Li Ming, monitor of our class, is tall, healthy and active. 方法2：定语从句 Li Ming, who is tall, healthy and active, is our monitor. 方法3：with介词短语表示伴随状况 Li Ming, our monitor, is a student with a strong body and an active mind. 1.用一个句子介绍以下人物。(三种表达) 姓名：陈燮霞；职业：女子举重运动员；身高：150cm；体重：47.5kg；出生日期：1983年1月8日；出生地点：广东省广州市。 方法1：同位语+定语(定语从句或短语) Chen Xiexia, a female weight-lifter who was born on January 8th, 1983 in Guangzhou City, Guangdong Province, is 150cm tall and weighs 47.5 kg. 即学即用 方法2：过去分词短语开头；with介词短语 Born on January 8th, 1983 in Guangzhou City, Guangdong Province, Chen Xiexia is a female weight-lifter with a height of 150 cm and a weight of 47.5 kg. 方法3：as介词短语 As a famous weight-lifter in China, Chen Xiexia was born on January 8th, 1983 in Guangzhou City, Guangdong Province, and is 150 cm in height and 47.5 kg in weight. 2.用一个句子介绍以下地点。(三种表达) 古迹名称：云冈石窟；地点位置：山西省大同市；始建时间：北魏时期；评价：举世闻名的艺术瑰宝。 方法1：同位语+定语(定语从句或短语) The Yungang Caves, one of the most valuable cultural relics in the world built in the Northern Wei Dynasty, are located in Datong, Shanxi Province. 方法2：过去分词短语开头 Located in Datong, Shanxi Province，the Yungang Caves date from the Northern Wei Dynasty and is regarded as one of the most valuable cultural relics in the world. 方法3：as介词短语 As a world-famous cultural relic, the Yungang Caves which are located in Datong, Shanxi Province，can date back to the Northern Wei Dynasty. 3.用一个句子介绍以下节日。(三种表达) 名称：清明节；性质：中国传统节日；目的：纪念祖先；日期：每年四月五日前后。 方法1：同位语+定语(定语从句或短语) Qingming Festival, a traditional festival (which is) in honour of our ancestors, falls on April 4th or 5th every year. 方法2：过去分词短语开头 Regarded as one of the most important Chinese traditional festivals, Qingming Festival