2016年高考英语写作最后冲刺 训练、点评和猜题 01（含解析）.docVIP

2016届高考英语写作最后冲刺——训练、点评和猜题 训练和点评练习一 为了营造一种“多读书，读好书”的良好氛围，班将举行一次主题班会，要求以 “A good book can affect our life ” 为题作演讲120个词左右，向同学们介绍一本自己读过的好书，并谈谈自己的感悟。 这是一篇演讲稿，写作时要注意格式：称呼语和结尾语；可根据内容要点适当增加细节，写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩，注意要求的字数在120词左右，不要太多或太少。特别注意最后要谈自己的看法，这样才能体现出文章的完整。除此之外，有下列重点需要考生认真思考，加以解决： 1.如何引出自己演讲的话题； 2.怎样介绍自己读过的一本好书； 3.自己从这本书中感悟出了什么； 4.如何深化你的演讲主题，增强演讲的鼓动性。 【参考答案】 Boys and girls, As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period. From the book, I have learned that whenever we come across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away. Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out. Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books! That’s all. Thank you! 【范文评析】 1.文章首句引用名人名言“As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man.”引出话题“A good book can affect our life in one way or another.”，可谓事半功倍。此句运用了时间状语从句和动名词状语作主语； 2.向听众介绍自己读过的一本好书时，用一个简单句“My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart.”恰到好处地打动了听众的心灵。用一个复合句“It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.”介绍了书的主要内容，为自己的感悟打下了伏笔。该句使用了how引导的表语从句； 4.为了深化演讲主题，作者用一个并列句“Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls.”来达到了目的。在本句中运用了并列连词not only…but also结构；文章的结尾“To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books!”非常具有演讲的鼓动性，该句将动词不定式作目的状语和祈使句的巧妙结合起来，尽显文章风采。 顺便说一下，范文作者运用了称呼语“Boys and girls,”和结尾语“That’s all. Thank you!”，没有忘记演讲稿的格式。 练习二 阅读使人充实，阅读对于每个人的成长至关重要。请认真阅读下面的引言(quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇