动物保护作文.pptVIP

Typical mistakes of the last composition: Computer is more important in our life. 2.There are 18 percent of the students use computers to study or search for information. 3.24% of the students always chats with others on Internet. Computers are more important… 18 percent of the students…/ There are 18% of the students using computers to study… chat/ on the Internet 5. To sum up, using computers is becoming a growing tendency . 6. I think parents should take measures once their children become addicted . 1.Aiming to how students in our class use computers, I did a survey and here is the result. Better sentences 2. 18% of the students uses computers to study or search for some information, which helps a lot . 3. When it comes to playing games, nearly half of the students told me they did so. 4. Besides, the rest students listen to music or watch movies while using computers . Blue sheep Blue sheep on HeLan mountain Blue sheep(岩羊) Problem: there are few blue sheep left . Effective measures: 1. Make more reserves for them. 2. Let people know the importance of… 3. Make stricter laws to keep them from being hunted... 4. Keep the balance of nature and supply enough food for/to them. 5. Leave them in peace and protect the environment. Discussion— some suggestions Write a letter of suggestion to WWF based on what we have discussed, asking them to help us save the endangered blue sheep. 1.Formal start to the letter (present the problem). 2.Body to the letter (suggestions) 3.Formal ending to the letter Dear WWF, I live in Yinchuan, Ningxia. The Helan Mountain here is the home of blue sheep but now there are few left. The following is my plan to save the blue sheep. … … Yours faithfully, William Long ★ firstly; what’s more; the most important is that we… ★ I’d appreciate it if you could…