看图作文写作指导.docVIP

课题 课型 课时 课时授课时间 授课 地点 授课教师 教 学 目 标 to make the composition more complete and coherent by using proper conjunctive words or expressions. 教学 重点 language and consistency. 教学 难点 consistent. 教学 方法 Tcooperative learning 教具 C 教师活动 设计意图 Swriting task and present a composition based on a student’s but including more grammatical mistakes from other students. Ask the students to grade it and give the reasons. Writing Task: 你准备参加《新东方英语》杂志正在举办的中学生英语作文竞赛。请根据以下四幅图画，描述寒假期间你在一家麦当劳快餐店打工的经历，并简单写出你的感受。 注意：词数不少于60。 A student’s composition: During the winter holidays, I found a job at McDonald’s near my home. My job is clean up the table and the ground. One day, there was a lovely child hold his birthday party at here. I said “Happy Birthday” to him and sing the birthday song with his classmates. We were all very exciting. On the other day, a American came in and spoke English order something. My workmate couldn’t understand, so I helped him because I could speak English free. At the end of my holidays, I got my pay from the manager and I used these money buy some gifts to my parents. I feel it is very significant! Show the students criteria of NMET and let Ss. find out the first standard is whether the composition covers all the key points required. So first check the key points of the sample. Task 1: 审题： 1. 文体：__________ 2. 时态：____________ 3. 人称：___________ 4. 要点：(中文) 1）__________________________________________ 2）__________________________________________ 3）__________________________________________ 4）__________________________________________ 5）__________________________________________ 3. Read the sample writing again and can grade it “第三档12-14分”. Step 2: How to improve the composition? Look at the criteria of NMET and compare the 3rd grade and the 2nd grade requirements and know how to improve the sample writing. First step should be to avoid mistakes in language. The students work in groups to list out th