书面表达----感谢信精要.ppt

【实战演练1】假如你是李华，前阵子因为脚断了而住院。在住院期间得到了医生和护士们的悉心照顾，如今已经出院。为感谢别人的帮助，你决定写一封感谢信给医院(如赞扬医生的高明医术，对病人的呵护等)。 注意: 词数100左右；开头已经写好，不计入总词数。 Dear staff， I am writing to convey my heartfelt thanks to all of you for what you have done during my stay at your hospital. Abundant thanks to each one of you for your brilliant skills, which lessened my pain and helped me recovered soon. Without it, I fear that it might have been more serious. What’s more, it’s your patience, tender care and genuine concern that relieved my boredom and pessimistic mood. I would never forget each word you said to me and the things you have done to me, as a result of which, I gained strength to face obstacles about my injury. Never stop your sincere way of working with people. Your help really means a lot to me and anyone in trouble as well. Affectionately, Wang Fang 假如你是李华，刚刚从英国学习回来，你是好友Peter在你学习期间为你提供了很多帮助。请你给他写一封e-mail感谢他对你的帮助(如帮你找寄宿家庭，带你参加各种活动等)，并邀请他来中国。 注意: 词数100左右；开头已经写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, I came back from England last week. _____________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 审题: 这是一封感谢信，交际性比较强。因为事情已经过去，所以时态应该以过去时为主。要点主要包括两个方面: 一是表达感谢，描述帮助；二是发出邀请。 写作难点： 描述帮助容易写得笼统，可适度展开，如寄宿家庭的友好表现或者具体参加了什么活动，这样内容会更加充实。(寄宿家庭: host family) 参考范文1] Dear Peter, I came back from England last week. I really want to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for your kind assistance during my stay in England. Thanks to your help, I found a wonderful host family, whose hospitality made me feel at home. What’s more, it’s really kind of you to take me to all kinds of interesting activities, which ahs taught me what I can’t learn from the textbooks and broadened my mind. It was your help that made me get