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 Chapter 4Composing an Essay part 2 The Hazards of Moviegoing I am a moive fanatic. However, I hate to watch moives in the theatre. The problems in getting to the theater, the terrible conditions of the theater itself , and the disturbing behavior of some moviegoers are all reasons why I dont want to go there. First of all, just getting to the theater presents difficulties. It takes about a thirty-minute drive to the theater down the crowed streets. And then there are the longlines waiting for you to buy a ticket for a populor movie. once entered, you are confronted with the problems of the theater itself. The musty smell is everywhere in the theater and you can never hope to take a fresh air. Also half the seats you sit in seem loose or tilted so that you sit in an awkard position, whats worse, some of the moviegoers are disturbing during the film. Little kids race up and down the aisles, usually in giggling packs; Teenagers whistle and shout at the screen; Adults comment loudly on the performance of the stars . With all these problems , I was tired of the experience of getting to the movies and dealing with the theater itself and some of the other moivegoers. Therefore, I dislike the idea of going to watch the moive in the theatre. 这是一篇典型的三段式的写作格式，第一段开头段introductory paragraph， 第二段主体段body paragraph， 最后一段结尾段concluding paragraph。一般情况下，开头段有中心思想 a thesis. 段与段之间有过渡语或承上启下的衔接词，最后一段是结尾， 重述文章主题和中心，首尾呼应。 5. Writing and rewriting the essay  Essay Structure I. Introduction Thesis Statement Body Paragraph 1-- Topic Sentence A. supporting idea B. supporting idea II. Body Body Paragraph 2-- Topic Sentence A. supporting idea B. supporting idea Body Paragraph 3-- Topic Sentence A. supporting idea B. supporting idea III. Conclusi