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写作指导?妙笔生花 写作要求 如何写电子邮件 假定你是李华,18岁,来自淄博,一个月前刚到英国,正在一所大学学习暑期课程,在写作方面遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助.请按下列要点写一电子邮件: 1．本人简介;2.求助内容;3.约定时间; 4．你的联系方式(Email:lihua@126.com;Phone 注意:1.词数100～120;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头结尾已为你写好. Dear Sir/Madam,_________________________ Yours, Li Hua 审题谋篇 1．时态:一般现在时　2.人称:第一人称 3．结构:①写信原因　②求助内容　③约定时间和联系方式 写作要点 (1.)你是李华,18岁,来自淄博. ①I’m Li Hua,___________a Chinese student from Zibo. ②I’m Li Hua,an ___________Chinese student from Zibo. 18 years old 18-year-old (2.)如果你能帮我解决问题,我会非常感激. ①I’d appreciate ____ you______ help me with my problem. ②I’d appreciate ____________ me (to) solve my problem. it if could yourhelping (3.)我在写作方面遇到一些困难. ①I have some difficulty _____________ a good composition. ②I have some difficulty when it____________ writing. in writing comes to (4.)听说学校辅导中心可以为学生提供帮助,我渴望能得到你们的帮助. ①I was told the Learning Center could________ help ____students and I ___________ get help. ②__________ that Learning Center could provide help for students,I _________ you ____help eagerly. provide for am eager to Hearing turned to for (5.)请告诉我你们哪天方便. ①Please let me know____________ is OK with you. ②Would you please________ me of the day __________ for you. which day inform available 佳作欣赏 DearSir/Madam, I’m Li Hua,18 years old, ①aChinesestudentfromZibo．I am taking summer courses in your university now. ②I’dappreciateitifyoucould help me with my problem. I came here last month and ③ foundmycoursesinteresting．What’s more,people here are friendly to me.To my joy,I have made great progress in my English.However,④Ihavesomedifficultyinwritingagoodcomposition．Fortunately ⑤IwastoldtheLearningCentercouldprovidehelpforstudentsandIameagertogethelp． I have no class on Tuesday morning and Friday afternoon.Please let me know which day is OK with you.You can send Email to me.My Email address:Lihua @126.com,or you can phone me,my phone number I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 名师点津 【美文点津】 ①使用同位语从句,简洁明了. ②I’d appreciat