基本写作专题复习—看图写作[演示课件].pptVIP

看图作文 高考作文评分细目 1. 下面4幅图片描述的是星期天上午在中山公园里发生的一件事。请根据图片所提供的信息用英语为你校的“英语园地”写一篇短文。 注意：①短文须包括所有图片的主要内容。短文的内容要连贯、完整； ②只能使用5个句子表达全部内容； ③参考词汇：货摊stand (n.);抢夺 snatch (v.) ; 逮捕 arrest (v.) 内容要点： 1.公园，冰淇淋货摊旁 ,年轻妇女的包被抢 2.人们追赶抢包者 , 3.长排椅上坐着一位老人,抢包者从老人身旁跑过，老人用伞将他绊倒, 4．两名警察逮捕抢劫者 , 5．妇女感谢老人，人们称赞老人的机智 ①One Sunday morning, there were some people in Zhongshan Park, where a woman was buying an ice-cream ,when a young man behind her snatched her handbag away. ②Seeing this, a few people began to run after the snatcher. ③As the young man was running past an old man, who was sitting quietly on a bench nearby, the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatcher’s legs. ④The young man fell down on the ground hard and two policemen came and arrested him. ⑤The woman thanked the old man, and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness.   How to write a picture story  Step2: Choose the correct main point or phrase for each picture. Step3: Put each group of  words into a sentence. (Pay attention to the correct verb form.) Step4: Choose correct connectives to join the sentences into a passage * * 基础写作专题之： Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 1.对内容的要求 2.对句式的要求 3.对词汇的要求 4.对语篇的要求 5.对书写的要求 6.对目的的要求 全面 多样 丰富 流畅，顺畅的连接和转折 正确，工整 符合写作要求 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 例文1 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.S