2013届高中考试英语二轮总复习第30讲要点写作演示课件新课标[湖南专用].pptVIP

第30讲 要点作文 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. (2012·辽宁卷)假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信，表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法，内容主要包括： 优点： 1. 话题广泛； 2. 图片丰富； 3. 有助于提高学习兴趣。 建议：适当降低词汇难度。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 注意： 1. 词数120左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 思路点拨：本文为一篇半开放性作文，书信体裁，在写作时要注意： 1. 不要遗漏要点： (1) 话题广泛；(2)图片丰富；(3)有助于提高学习兴趣；(4)建议： 适当降低词汇难度。2. 要恰当合理的使用连接成分，高级词汇和复杂句式，使文章更具文采。3.在答题过程中还要注意卷面的整洁和书写的美观。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. Therefore, Id like to suggest changing them into easier ones. Best regards, Li Hua Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 【作文点评】 本文行文紧凑，过渡自然；要点完整，表达清楚；语法正确，时态准确；用词无误，很好地完成了写作任务。文中使用了衔接用语，如： such as, I think, Whats more, However, Therefore等，还用了复杂句式，如： 表语从句that we can find a variety of topics；定语从句which can help us understand English better和who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject等。书信格式规范。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 要点作文分为提供全部写作要点和提供部分写作要点。提供全部写作要点的作文要求考生根据给定的内容，在增加适当的过渡词汇的基础上，写出一篇内容完整的短文。而另一种情况是命题者给出了部分写作内容，同时又要求考生根据提示作一定程度的合理发挥，具有一定的开放性，也就是通常所说的半开放性作文。 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 要点作文是高考常考题型，也是最为基本的考查考生写作能力的题型，学生写好要点作文是写好其他类型作文的基础。这类试题通常考查的是根据提示语写短文、书信、演讲、报道