书面表达基础之“五步造句法”解读.ppt

书面表达基础之“五步造句法” 【五步造句法】 车窗外的风景。 ?车窗外看到许多鲜花绿草。 ?我看到许多鲜花绿草（在车窗外）。 I saw some flowers and grass (outside the windows) (of the car). Suddenly, I saw some attractive flowers and grass outside the windows of the car. 之所以有时句子翻译不出来，不是因为你英语差，而是因为你中文水平太高！ 中文?简单直白?英文 先帝创业未半而中道崩殂。 你爸爸死了在实现梦想之前。 Your father died (before realizing his dreams). 【鬼话】今天下三分，益州疲弊，此诚危急存亡之秋也。 【人话】今天世界被分成三个国家，在其中我们的国家很弱，这件事儿很危险。 【英语】Today, the world has been divided (into three countries), (in which) ours is the weakest, (which is dangerous). 【五步造句法】 【要点】中文说话不用句子。 【句子化】完整的句子经常是不必要的在中文里。 【翻译】A complete sentence is often unnecessary in Chinese. 学英语好难。 ?Learning English is difficult. ?To learn English is difficult. ?It is difficult to learn English. 【2013新课标Ⅰ】（求助信+告知信） 假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信, 告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在的城市开会, 带去他想要的那幅中国画, 同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明: 李明: 高个子, 戴眼镜 航班号: CA985 到达: 8月6日上午11: 30 【2013新课标Ⅰ】（求助信+告知信） 假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信, 告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在的城市开会, 带去他想要的那幅中国画, 同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明: 李明: 高个子, 戴眼镜 航班号: CA985 到达: 8月6日上午11: 30 【找要点+句子化+简单化】 Dear Peter, How are you doing? 我叔叔李明将要去你的城市开会。他将带去你想要的那幅中国画。所以，我写信询问你是否可以去机场接他。 现在，我要告诉你一些细节。第一，李明高个子、戴眼镜。第二，他的航班号是CA985。第三，他将在8月6日上午11:30到达。 我希望你能够帮我这个忙。我期待你的回信。 Dear Peter, How are you doing? My uncle LiMing is going to your city for a meeting. He will bring to you the Chinese painting which you want. However, he is not familiar with your city. So, I am writing to ask you whether you can go to the airport to pick him up. Now, I will tell you some details. First and foremost, LiMing is tall, wearing a pair of glasses; as a result, it is easy to recognize him. Additionally, his flight number is CA985. Last but not least, he will arrive at 11:30 in the morning on August 6th, which means you won’t have to get up too early. Hopefully, you would do me the favor and would enjoy the painting. I am looking forward to your reply. Best wishes!