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山西广灵县2017高考英语一轮短文改错综合训练（2）答案 短文改错 　　Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei 　　Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous 1. _______ 　　mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 2. _______ 　　was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 3 _______ 　　the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we 4._______ 　　climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples 5. _______ 　　and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 6. _______ 　　since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 7. _______ 　　Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at 8. _______ 　　the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and 9. _______ 　　the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. 10. ______ 　　答案及解析 　　1. famous 前加 a。mountain 为可数名词。又是第一次被谈及， 故应在 famous 前加不定冠词。 　　2. 此行无错。 　　3. noon 后加 when 。It was about noon 是主句， 后面的应为从句， 故在 noon 后加when， 此处 when 意为“在……时候”。 　　4. them 改为 us。综观全文可知， 此文是用第一人称的口吻来叙述的。 　　5. visiting 改为 visited。此处climbed， visited 和 told 构成并列谓语。 　　6. picture 改为 pictures。 　　7. passes 改为 passed。应与全文时态一致。 　　8. 删去 down。 　　9. and 改为 but。饭菜很贵不是一件令人愉快的事， 而服务质量很高确实是一件好事， 故前后为转折关系。 　　10. 删去 at。the moment直接引导时间状语从句。 【2016概论训练】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and fou