中考英语作文范文—2012邵阳材料作文特殊句式和变化句式.docVIP

2012年湖南省邵阳市中考英语 材料作文 特殊句式和变化句式 作文 (计10分) 交网友须慎重。假如有几位网友想加你为QQ好友。请根据下面表格信息，以Who can be my QQ good friends?为标题，写一篇英语短文。 NameAgeSexHobbiesLiu Xing15malegoing fishing;playing the guitar; reading magazineLi Tao14maleSmoking; drinking wine(白酒); dying(染)hair into different colorsXia Xue16femalereading good books; listening to music; playing table tennis要求： 1.70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数； 2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁； 3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名。 Who can be my QQ good friends? Dear friends, we should be careful when we make QQ friends. I’d like to make QQ friends with those who have the same hobbies as me. I think friendship is so important in our lives that we we’ll never lose it. 材料作文写作技巧之2 特殊句式和变化句式 特殊句式尤其是倒装句、感叹句、强调句型、非谓语的使用，这些句式的使用不仅使文章生动、表达准确，同时还证明了学生深厚的语言功夫以及表达能力。 通常，我们在草稿上，按照通常的做法，我们将材料遣词造句，连句成篇。但是，有时，为了避免文章句子的重复或达到高分的目的，我们需要在修改及文章润色过程，将句子变换一下，通常要应用倒装句、感叹句、强调句型、非谓语结构。 该材料常规的遣词造句为如下： Liu Xing is15 he is male, his hobbies are going fishing; playing the guitar and reading magazine. Li Tao is 14 he is male his hobbies are smoking; drinking wine and dying hair into different colors. Xia Xue is 16, she is female her hobbies are reading good books; listening to music and playing table tennis. 特殊句式和变化句式 Liu Xing is15. Being a male, his hobbies are going fishing; playing the guitar and reading magazine. (非谓语结构) Li Tao is an14-year-old boy. What bad hobbies he has. He likes smoking; drinking wine and dying hair into different colors.( 感叹句) Xia Xue is a girl of 16 years old, and reading good books; listening to music and playing table tennis are her hobbies.( 倒装句) Who can be my QQ good friends? Dear friends, we should be careful when we make QQ friends. I’d like to mak