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应试策略 扣题 观点明朗 结构合理（分三段，每段以总-分-总形式） Topic sentence(主题） 论点（分论点） Conclusion（总结） 不要标新立异 语言使用 1、中式英语 （1）Failure is the mother of success （2）Success always goes behind failure （3）There is bamboo in one’s heart （4）One has a well-thought-out plan 2、词性乱用 （1）As we all know , no one can always success in one’s daily life and work —Succeed vi （2）I have some difficult in sleeping at night nowadays —Difficulty n （3）You don’t play the game like I do —As （4）It’s such small that you cannot see it —So 3、时序错乱 （1）They come always late to school —Always come, be Eg：Ever ,never seldom soon sometimes almost scacely ,hardly ,nearly ,even （2）I should have not gone there —Should not have Eg：Never , seldom ,rarely ,neither ,nor not only ,nosooner ,hardly （3）Never I have heard of such a thing —Never have I 4、词的累赘 （1）I first began to feel sick when we went into the classroom （2）In this modern world of today ,people like being dressed well （3）I cannot hardly read his letter because of his illegible handwriting 5、成分不足 (1)However.I think not necessary to worry about failure (2)I don’t think it is necessary to worry about failure (3)I don’t think it necessary to worry about failure 6、代词的指示关系含糊 （1）She told my sister that she was wrong （2）I‘m wrong”she said to my sister 7、缺少逻辑主语 （1）To get up early , the clock was set at six （2）To get up early,he set the clock at six 8、缺少修饰语 （1）we have many well-known scientists at home and abroad （2）We have many scientists well-known at home and abroad （3）The Japanese mountaineer sent us the full story of his rescue from Tibet （4）From Tibet the Japanese mountaineer sent us the full story of his rescue 六、句子生动 1、使用等立分句（相当于中文排比句） （1）As he is a hero,I honour him ; as he is a coward ,I sneak at him （2）A man is judged not only by what he says but also by what he does Eg：And , not only ….. but also , either … or neither ….nor both ….and 使用从句 （1）John is a new student. He comes from a southern province.He speaks a dialect . We find it to